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Friday 8:45 p.m.
The sensei and reverend sent me an email saying Bomber was alright the way it was. I finished reading it today. I liked the first chapter, as I said, but after that it's just a lot of shifting the furniture around. All the okay bits were late additions, but I can't see me going in and re-writing that. So I'll have to get an idea. Where do these writers get their ideas from? If I'm not going to re-write Bomber, I'm back to the question of how many dwarves, and will anyone escape by hot air balloon?
When Adolfphus Nannbugger Milngavieavitch looked up from the mutilated corpse of Albert McClonkiedickhead, he saw A Very Long Name come over the hill in a hot air balloon, accompanied as usual by his retinue of nasty dwarves.
Are you allowed to say nasty dwarves? Nasty, vertically challenged folk!
The sensei and reverend sent me an email saying Bomber was alright the way it was. I finished reading it today. I liked the first chapter, as I said, but after that it's just a lot of shifting the furniture around. All the okay bits were late additions, but I can't see me going in and re-writing that. So I'll have to get an idea. Where do these writers get their ideas from? If I'm not going to re-write Bomber, I'm back to the question of how many dwarves, and will anyone escape by hot air balloon?
When Adolfphus Nannbugger Milngavieavitch looked up from the mutilated corpse of Albert McClonkiedickhead, he saw A Very Long Name come over the hill in a hot air balloon, accompanied as usual by his retinue of nasty dwarves.
Are you allowed to say nasty dwarves? Nasty, vertically challenged folk!
posted by Hotboy at 8:47 PM
6 Comments:
Nasty, vertically challenged folk!
I see you are being politically correct?
Hope you have a great weekend Hotboy!
I'm not sure you're allowed to call them nasty either, but "of reduced pleasantness" or "amiability-deprived" should be okay.
I say!
"When Adolfphus Nannbugger Milngavieavitch looked up from the mutilated corpse of Albert McClonkiedickhead, he saw A Very Long Name come over the hill in a hot air balloon, accompanied as usual by his retinue of nasty dwarves."
For twenty quid, could I feature as the pilot of the hot air balloon, drifting over the savanna in the Masai Mara?
"From his vantage pont in the balloon, Menzies Milngavie looked down on the scene, mistook one of the amiability-deprived vertically challenged lingerers for a bongo, got out his shotgun..." I'll leave the rest to you.
By golly - its a very long time since I bagged a bongo.
MM III
Hello there! Maybe yous get the ideas and I'll ghost write it for twenty five quid! Hotboy
Eric: You'll have to write the manual! Hotboy
MM - sensitively put.
But there's too much outsourcing these days, nobody wants to actually take responsibility for doing the work themselves.
The focus group here came up with "his red tin of urine from tasty whores" ©
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